I would really like a mentor. I have had one person tell me that I'm confusing with my rps and what not, which I thought that she was enjoying the rp since she never said anything like this before. I need help with working on making my posts really descriptive, like for the surrounding area when entering a new place and little motions like when a character puts there hand in their pocket type of thing. We can start up an rp and tell me what I can fix and what not to make it better. So yeah. I have a few plots in mind. I would really like to make my characters come to life and have a defined personality and work on my posts.