This is the first post for the thread, OOC : Ready for improvement?.
You may edit this first post as you see fit.
Oh snap, you did this while I was at work! Neat. :B
And I hope you have not a single still moment.
Character posted.
Who am I? Oh, don't worry. I'm just the Entity of Greed. No, no, I don't want anything from you. I just want to help, in any and every way I can. No strings attached. Of course, you will owe me a favor. A big one, by the looks of this mess, but hey! What are friends for?
The suspense is killing meeeeeeee~!
That is an unfortunate mouse slip, Strude ^^'...
Hey I'd love to be a teacher- specifically in the art of Snappy comebacks and rousing speeches, as well as how to give just enough info on a twist to garner interest without giving it away. So if anyone wants that, I'd love to help!
Looking for Rps! Message me!
For all the Teachers, I am gonna be demonstrating how this works. If done right Xavi you will have to emulate EVERYONE in a game. This way people can get the feel of a game without playing one yet.
Checkmate.
Would you stop pointing it out every time?
Students get a location. I am gonna deal with the first few posts, just to set the idea. I mean, you can all adopt your own styles, cause learning diffrent styles will be helpful. But I just wanna show a rough outline of what I want.
Checkmate.
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Hm... I didn't really get the space in the middle of your post... do I have to fill it or I start with responding to the last part?
Well, the bit in the middle is just a note. Sorry for the confusion. I am just trying to explain clearly but alas. I made it unclear. Just feel free to post how you think is correct.
Checkmate.
Would you stop pointing it out every time?
In the "Notes" section—so true.
Meta-gaming is, by far, one of the MOST aggravating thing to encounter in RP'ing. It's WORSE than god-modding in a fight because it renders characters transparents and depth-less.
And it's something that I feel most writers often overlook or forget because they want to "cover everything." :/
By the way, hi, guys. lol.
It is only with the heart that one can see rightly;
what is essential is invisible to the eye.
TUMBLR.
Jing. You are my hero.
You Demon Hunter my Monk.
... PAHAHA.
Checkmate.
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I am the sexiest Demon Hunter—ever.
Everyone be wanting a piece of me... lol. Man, I should make a character so I can practice. I think I'll do that now... I do have someone I want to try out. (:
It is only with the heart that one can see rightly;
what is essential is invisible to the eye.
TUMBLR.
Hello! Awesome first post, I will have to comment in morning as it is 4 am here but I shall do just that. Good work.
Checkmate.
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Awesome. I'm a bit late, but thanks for approving my character!
Yeah! And the image will be Warmachine!
Checkmate.
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Oh, yeah.... I probably should have asked, but... slipped my mind, lol.
I was hoping to be a student as well as a teacher—reason for why I submitted a secondary character... Not sure if that was... obvious or... just... yeah, okay.
It is only with the heart that one can see rightly;
what is essential is invisible to the eye.
TUMBLR.
I wasn't 100% but I had guessed. Imma do that now.
Checkmate.
Would you stop pointing it out every time?
Hn. I was going through my old Gaia posts/profiles (to put up as references) and... lol... In my latter years (as in last year), I really went super casual with my writing, lol.
And... naturally, instead of picking representative selections, I had to sit down and read through all the posts of the RP and relive the moment, lolol... As much as writing for Wildfire pained me (lots of needless bs), I really did like Aldrich (one of my characters). I kind of wish I could write for him again.
Hn... S'all good though. Haha.
EDIT: ALSO, PIKACHUUU~ ちょっとかわいい!笑!
Last edited by joonsexual; 06-05-2012 at 02:38 PM.
It is only with the heart that one can see rightly;
what is essential is invisible to the eye.
TUMBLR.
That is fine and approved. I for one am just gonna be describing the character at the start of a scenario. This way it is less messy as I plan to subject them to many little rp's as practice. When they feel more confident I will put them in a more serious RP enviroment. OH! I need to pm you. Like. NOW. >D
Why not revive him and use him? I mean... That is the best way. Each character I have takes a part of me, and if I get a craving for a character, I have to satisfy it.
Checkmate.
Would you stop pointing it out every time?
Damn it Strude! Potty talk already? To my office!
EDIT! Jing, you have a choice. You can submit some posts that you feel are some ofthe reasons you need help and tell me what you feel you need improvement on, or you can do the basics like Xavi wants to do! XD
Last edited by Misaru; 06-05-2012 at 03:05 PM.
Checkmate.
Would you stop pointing it out every time?