[Finalization's in Progress] The two dominate races on the plant have been at war since the time of the Great God War, each believe that they are the sole descendants of the original people created and nurtured by their gods Ulta and Nerit.......
On
a distance plant, in a far away galaxy much like our own, its peaceful.
Enormous mountain ranges covered in lush greenery over look quietly
rushing waters of lakes and streams in a vast forest. The animal life
live in what seems complete harmony...but not all is what it seems. Two
powerful races living on different continents separated by a deep blue
ocean are about to rage war.
Survivors of Sythril-
A people remarked for their technology and advancement in Herbalism.
The Renegades of Vanguard-
A physically strong and waring race. Born to battle they start training as soon as they can hold a weapon.
These two people are in a fight for their heritage, the right to claim a holy land said to be the origin of all and the Originals. Each believing they were created first by their gods
Ulta-
The Creator, the beginning, mother.
Nerit-
The Nurturer, warmth, healer.
Will you join the fight? Which side will you chose? Let us enter this world of turmoil this Land of the Lost...Origin.
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Rules
1) Grammar, Spelling, etc etc:
Please be correct when it comes to grammar, spelling, etc. Use Capital
Letters, full stops, spell correctly (if you really can't spell
something right because it's hard, then fine, it's not your fault), don't
have awful grammar in posting. It messes up the story and makes it bad
quality. Plus it may be hard to read someone's posts. In the past,
I've had to leave RPs because I cant keep up with the fact some people's
writing has been terrible. We all wanna enjoy RPing with each other,
but to do that, it needs to be good quality. If you make a Typo, I
understand
2)God-Modding and Power-Modding:
When it comes to being an RP character, you may be tempted to break
this rule. Don't make your power too strong, don't be unbeatable. The
story and the adventures you face, must be a challenge. If you just
sweep through everything and survive everything, like an dragon/wolf
hybrid on crack, then you are just going to take away all the enjoyment
out of the story. Power-modding is also bad. Power-modding is
controlling someone else character. It's annoying and people might not
want you to do something with their character.
3)Play-scripting: sigh,
why do people have to resort to play-scripting. Remember that RPs a
story, not a script. Play-scripting is a rule break in any self
respecting RP. It also limits what you can do in a scene, because it's
mostly dialogue along with a really bad way of trying to show
description and action of what happens in the scene.
Layla: yush, this is a rule break, I shall ban hammer myself now
Ongoing Spectator: But you has no ban hammer
Layla: I left it in the car, be right back
Yes, play-scripting is annoying. What is even worse is when people do
everything in *stars* I've seen put actions, and even dialogue in
stars. It's terrible. Also avoid doing the RP in present tense.
4)Don't ever, break the Fourth Wall!:
It's it the solid foundation that keeps any story alive. This includes
talking to the audience, or if someone makes a mistake, you make a post
like:
Ory laughed "it's spelt failure, not falure"
Those posts are so annoying. This also includes suddenly knowing someone else plans.
person 1:
"I'm going to go to them and I'm going to fight them" Ory decided to himself.
person 2:
"Ory has decided to fight us! We must attack him!" said the really lame RPer
When a person makes a plan, you may know it, but your character doesn't.
Don't suddenly be psychic and read everyone's mind. It breaks down the
Fourth Wall along with the entire RP. Also, try to keep your posts at
the correct time of day. If it's the middle of the day IN the RP, don't
suddenly say it's nighttime.
5) Machine-Gun Posting: This
a rule to prevent people being left out. If not all of the RPers are
on and they start posting and RPing so much, like it goes over a page or
two, think what will happen to another RPer who comes on and has seen
that the RP has basically gone off without him! It's not nice to
Machine-Gun post in an RP, because it ruins it for RPers who are online.
So when you are posting in the RP with someone else, or a couple of
people, just remember that other RPers who are offline, are still part
of the RP, so in order to keep it that way, make sure they are included
and don't let the RP trail off without them.
Background
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Sythril is the capital of the land to the east
Ultina, named after the god they revered the most. It is a land full of
lushes plant and vibrant animal life, its mountains are said to be so
high that they can almost touch the stars. Contrary to the nature filled
land the people of Sythril live in high technical towns and cities.
Even with their technology they still respect the land and have plant
life growing in and around their homes, but still keep a very strict way
of life.
Survivors of Sythrilxxx They believe that Ulta the Creator created the
first people and Nerit the Nurturer jealous over her abilities and how
highly the people praised her over him tried to have the people bow down
to him as the supreme god. Ulta noticing Nerit's actions was angered by
his selfishness. This argument erupted into the "God War" which
separated the land into three parts:
Ultina, Vanguard and Mider, "The Holy land/Origin of all.”
They were given the name Survivors by Ulta when they refused to take up
arms in the "God War", she also knew with them doing this it would
result in most of them would die in the process. Even so they remained
as they were the day they were created, a peaceful people. They are a
people remarked for their technology and advancement in Herbalism.
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It lies to the West of Mider, it is full of
life but due to Sythril's advancement in Herbalism it looks less
vibrant. It is cape in high sky-scraping trees and steep jagged mountain
ranges. The people are a waring race, though they are not always
fighting there are some clan wars. They are raised to be warriors,
strong and proud of their history. The towns are spread out all over due
to the lands huge size.
xxxThe Renegades of Vanguard They believe that Nerit is the supreme god
since he nurtures the people of the land while Ulta only created them.
In the Renegades history it is said that their ancestors were in the
front lines during the “God War” with their warriors and the archers
heading most of the fight on Nerit’s side. They were given the name
Renegades during the war and have kept the name ever since. After the
war they moved to the opposite side of Mider claiming land there and
naming it Vanguard.
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The Holy Land, said to be the Origin of all. No
one has been to the land since the time of the gods, it is untouched by
any hands. In both the Renegade and Survivor histories it is said that a
lone temple lie in the middle of the land. The White Temple was the
place were Nerit and Ulta could be seen and given offerings to. It was
also the place were the "God War" began and the source of unimaginable
power rests.
This
is a picture taken by a Sythrilen probe sent into Mider a decade ago.
The camera was having difficulty but before it taking this one picture.
In it you can see a strange girl on the top of what many Sythrilen
Historians believe to be the ruins of the Holy Temple of Worship. The
yellow glow from her face is the only color that was captured before all
signal was lost.
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The God War
(During the time of the Gods)
A series of battles that lasted over years and
split the land creating the three now existing lands. The people were
split into two groups one siding with the Creator, Ulta called their
side Sythril and the other siding with the Nurturer, Nerit called theirs
Vanguard as it stays to this day.
However, there are other races and groups of people within this world
some take the Lower Gods into high regard others don't believe in any of
it and try to live their lives as they see fit.
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Characters
I had a character skeleton that I wanted people to use, but as it stands this site has its own way of making character profiles so just add some of these things into your profile please. ●●●▅▅▅▅▅●●●▅▅▅▅▅●●●
xxxxFull Name: The character's full, complete name.
xxxRole: For example, general role, or story-specific role.
xxxName at birth: Same
thing, but only if it was different when the character was born, i.e.
if s/he changed name because of marriage, adoption, religious
conversion, or other reason. xxxAliases/Nicknames (if any): Any aliases or nicknames that the character is addressed by, referred to as, or uses for whatever purpose on any regular basis.
xxxTitle(s): Any title, such as "Dr.", or "Lord"
Age/Date of Birth: Both the character's
age at the start of the story, or 'canon', as well as the complete date
of birth with the appropriate calendar.
xxxSex: Male or female. xxxSexual Orientation/Gender Identity: How does the character identify his or her gender?
xxxRace/Ethnicity: What is the character's race? There are also several different race's outside of the main two.
xxxSkin Tone: What is the character's skin tone? This may be 'dark brown', 'light brown', 'olive', 'pale', 'albino'?
xxxHeight:
xxxWeight:
xxxBuild: What
is the character's build? Slender, athletic, frail, sturdy, stocky,
muscular, or plump may be some of the adjectives that come to mind.
xxxEyes:
xxxHair: What
is the character's hair color? Be specific without using purple prose.
Also describe the texture, thickness, length, style, and any other
significant attributes, such as whether it is oily or particularly
shiny. If it is dyed, has highlights, or otherwise has unnatural
alterations, those should be noted and explained.
xxxClothes Style: What style of clothes does the character wear? They must be related to the kind of race they are.
xxxReligion or Political Affiliation: If any
xxxWeapons (if any):Does
the character have any weapons or other sorts of equipment? What are
they, how did he or she obtain them, and why does he or she keep them?
Has the character ever lost or had confiscated any weapons or equipment?
What were they, and why did this happen?
xxxOccupation(s):What
is the character's occupation? Does he or she have multiple concurrent
occupations or jobs? When did he or she start? How high up on the ladder
is the character?
xxxSpecial Abilities/Skills: Does
the character have any other special abilities or skills, whether
highly desirable or not? Talents, learned skills, and such may all be
listed here.
xxxActivities/Organizations: What
sorts of activities does the character engage in? What organizations is
he or she actively supporting or participating in, and what
organizations is the character loosely affiliated with? What sorts of
activities and affiliations has the character had in the past and why
are they no longer current?
xxxInterests: Any other interests that the character has or has had, such as philosophy, economics, or weaponry.
xxxPlace of Birth: Where, city or province, was the character born?
xxxFamily: Who is in the character's family? Immediate? Siblings? Children?